Two Language Points
A couple of points which keep repeating themselves in your compositions.
i) Downtown.
Downtown in English is not a noun. You cannot say, for example, 'I meet my friends in the downtown'.
Downtown in English can be used as an adjective, eg 'We met in a downtown restaurant.'
It can also be used as an adverb, eg 'We're going downtown later on - do you want to come too?'
If you find yourself writing 'in the downtown', change it for 'in the town centre' or 'in the city centre'.
ii) Everyday and every day
'Everyday' is an adjective. 'It was an everyday occurence.' 'Violence is part of everyday viewing on tv.'
'Every day' is an adverbial time expression. 'We met every day.' 'Hundreds of visitors come to the museum every day.'
The same is true of the expression 'every time', though there is no adjective, 'everytime'.
These are the kinds of mistakes it's very easy to edit for when you've finished writing a composition. Just read through and see if you've made either of them!